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Redshirts: Adventures in Absurdity, Volume 1
Publisher: Happy Gnome Publishing
by James W. [Verified Purchaser]
Date Added: 02/24/2018 23:01:19

The adventure seems pretty solid, and an interesting break from the regular Starfinder universe. It could be laid out a little better, and they could do with a bit of proofreading. Also, I could do without some of the campaign setting aspects to its backstory. Hell, one paragraph in particular in the introduction reads like a literal fedora with arms wrote it.

TL;DR Fix the layout, do some proofreading, maybe get rid of the neckbeardy crap, and this could be a solidly funny AP.



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[3 of 5 Stars!]
Redshirts: Adventures in Absurdity, Volume 1
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Creator Reply:
Thank you for your review. I'd like to assure you that both our proofreader and my partner, Phillip the writing Fedora, have been publicly flogged for their role in this atrocity.
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